Because as genuinely noble as they were, yeah, they'd never know exactly what life was like down there. They couldn't.
That "show, don't tell" is going to be exceedingly important in forming Gilda as well. I'm nearly done with my second draft revisions of those scenes. I'll run 'em by you eventually, of course.
Oddly, I'm keeping that Harry Potter defense of yours in mind. Remember what you said about the fandom? I'm starting to think it's a matter of giving the readers just enough information to let their imaginations take them away to fill in the gaps, even if it's gaps entirely of their own devising.
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Because as genuinely noble as they were, yeah, they'd never know exactly what life was like down there. They couldn't.
That "show, don't tell" is going to be exceedingly important in forming Gilda as well. I'm nearly done with my second draft revisions of those scenes. I'll run 'em by you eventually, of course.
Oddly, I'm keeping that Harry Potter defense of yours in mind. Remember what you said about the fandom? I'm starting to think it's a matter of giving the readers just enough information to let their imaginations take them away to fill in the gaps, even if it's gaps entirely of their own devising.