Cover Letter, first draft/appeal for help

So here's my cover letter for THE HEFNER MONOLOGUES that I'm thinking of sending to the literary agent.

( What do you folks think? )

Does it need to be shorter? Anything I do usually does. Is there anything that could be worded better? Am I forgetting anything? Is there a better way for me to point out who I'm like/how I'm unique/who my audience is/why this should be of ANY interest?

Your help is greatly appreciated, as always.

worth it

EDIT: Whoops! Link fixed!

GIP, first and foremost.

Secondly:




( THE HEFNER MONOLOGUES photo shoot pictures by Roy Cox are ready )